What a writing conference did for my novel
Last month I travelled to Devon, England for the Historical Novel Society UK conference held at the historic Dartington Estate. There and back, I rode six trains, not including tubes, trams, and the Paris RER, which made me very happy.
Some highlights of the conference included listening to the funny and insightful Kate Quinn share her experiences and wisdom, Jane Johnson’s story of a climbing trip gone wrong, and Ian Mortimer’s thought-provoking speech on the similarities and differences between history and historical fiction.
Before I hopped on the train though, I pulled out a manuscript that I hadn’t touched in nearly a year. I hadn’t meant for so much time to pass without working on it, but moving abroad and launching a business took priority. Even before that though, I had hit a point where I knew the plot wasn’t working and I didn’t have a solution, yet.
I must admit to feeling some trepidation when I first opened the file and saw all those words that I had written. When I read it through, I was relieved to realize that the writing was good. But there was still that major plot hole in the middle. This became especially apparent when I introduced the book idea to other writers at the conference.
Trying to discuss my book during quick introductions meant I was repeatedly hearing the disconnect between the two parts of my story. Distance and speaking about it out loud with other writers gave me the shift in perspective necessary to make the tough call to separate the book in two.
When I returned, I immediately read through my original manuscript and began the careful excavation that will allow two new stories to bloom. While it is disappointing to find that I am further away from The End, I am choosing to see it as an opportunity. Now, I have two strong books in progress.
The next time you feel stuck in your story, try setting it aside for a while. And then, start talking about your work with others. It just might lead to insights you would otherwise miss out on.
Have you ever been stuck while writing? What helped you get past it? Hit reply and let me know.
Definitely, Shauna. Setting aside helps. There’s certainly something about time and distance from the piece that gives the writing a new perspective. The other thing that I love doing, is motion. Walking, swimming, anything monotonous that allows the brain to swim in its own silkiness. Your piece is a wonderful reminder.